Angel Marie!~

[jennamae]

ANGELmarieMATAMOROS
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Hey, my name is Angel Marie and here's my application for Chaford. I am currently 18, and I think I should be in this school because I am I am a dedicated student, and I'll try my hardest to make friends here. I think I should be in this school because I am hardworking, caring, a great leader && follower, and an overall smart girl.and I'll try my absolute hardest here insert at least three things about your charrie here .

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&first name; Angel
&surname; Matamoros
&middle name;Marie
&alias; A.M,An
&age; {13 - 19}
&sexual orientation; Bi
&;date of birth; 12\18\91
&birthplace; Harlingin,TX

[this.is.me.this.is.real]

&history; When Angel was littel she lived in TX,but when she was about 2 1\2 she moved to MN,she is currently living in MN..Angel has friends and family that love her and thats really all she needs at the end of the day!

&personality; Angel is one of those girls who you would think would never do anything bad,but once you really get to know her anything is possible.At first glance Angel seems likes someone you wouldn't want to waste your time finding out about,but if you really take the time to get to know her she's fersure something special. All you got to do,Is ask her about her self a little bit and if she trust you maybe,just she might let you get to know her

&likes; Angel is one of those girls who you would think would never do anything bad,but once you really get to know her anything is possible.At first glance Angel seems likes someone you wouldn't want to waste your time finding out about,but if you really take the time to get to know her she's fersure something special. All you got to do,Is ask her about her self a little bit and if she trust you maybe,just she might let you get to know her.

&soft spots; Soft Spots: Angel May look tought and mean,but inside she has a very soft sweet heart core,but you just have to take time and get to know her,to find that all out. =]

&fears; One of the many fears Angel has is to find a guy she just may ..really.. like,and then tell him she loves him,but to only find out he only thinks of her as a friend,and dosnt think of her that way..Angel's worst fear, is to get her heartbroken..no matter how hard she tries she know sooner or later she'll get it broken anyway.

[favorites]

&color; Black,Red,Green,Lime Green,Neon Pink
&band; Panic at the Disco,Green Day,Fall out Boys, All American Rejects
&song; Panic at the Disco,Green Day,Fall out Boys, All American Rejects
&animal; Panther,Tiger,Monkey,Pittbull,German Shepperd
&other; Everyone's worth it. No matter what it costs. No sacrifice is ever forgotten.

[i.like.your.style]

at least 3 shirts, preferably links.

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at least 3 bottoms, preferably links.

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at least 1 bathing suit, preferably link(s).

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at least 1 pair of shoes, preferably link(s).

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any amount of accessories, preferably links.

[we.are.family]

&mother; Alica,42
&father; Todd,45
&siblings; Ashley,16,Jon,19
&pets; Koby,pitbull

[behind.blue.eyes]

&name; Angel Marie
&alias; A.M,An
&age; {13-19}
&gender;Female
&roleplaying example; ~character name: Angel Marie
~dorm number 5 .

[x'Autumn Wolfe;;]

You have to remember to follow the application code, and hand it exactly what it calls for. Nothing less.

Keep working, Angel Marie! You're doing great!

[Lindsey Williams]

Haley, you have to be more specific. Jenna hasn't, I believe, been on a roleplaying site before.

Jenna, here are some places you need to fix.

• The first thing you see is FIRSTmiddleLAST. You have to erase that and put your character's name there. On my application, I changed it to LINDSEYleighWILLIAMS.
  
• Then, in the first paragraph under FIRSTmiddleLAST, the underlined words need to be erase and replaced with three things that describes your character.
  
• Next, the personality and history need to be much longer. Three GOOD paragraphs for your history, and two GOOD paragraphs for your personality.
  
• Your likes and soft spots aren't written correctly. Likes would be like: puppies, chocolate, television, computer, guitars, etc. Soft spots are the same, except it's what your character has a soft spot for. Most girls have a soft spot for chocolate, guys, etc.
  
• Your favorite song isn't suppose to be a band name. You can, of course, choose songs by that band, just not the band name.
  
• Your clothing preferances should be made into actual links. It's not hard at all. It's exactly like Grophland, too.
  
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• The very last part of the application is about YOU, and the roleplaying example must be an actual roleplay example. It needs to be a good three paragraphs, that shows us how well you can roleplay.

If you need a referance as to what to do, please feel free to check out my application . Just do not actually use any of my work I have. Only use it as a referance.

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[x'Autumn Wolfe;;]

Dun't worry, Jeshh, I already mailed her 'bout it

[Lindsey Williams]

Well, you see, I figured it would be easier for her to fix the problems on her post if she could also see what I've written. I mean, I don't think she can remember all 7 problems. I know I can't. xD

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[x'Autumn Wolfe;;]

Me either
Considering I can't remember anything, anyways, definitely not xD

[jennamae]

Thnk 4 the help~ -..sMilE I lOvE yOu..-

[Lindsey Williams]

Keep going, Jenna!
You've fixed a few and there are only a couple more!
I'll edit my first post so you can see what you have left to do! :]

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[jennamae]

Otay!~ thnkx muchness!~

~-..sMiLe I lOvE yOu..-~

[jennamae]

[;kay martinez xx]

Here, Jannelle. I'll be posting my application today, and tomorrow when I have time, I will fix up your application for you. Send me a message on here with a quick summary of what her life was like and crap. I'll fix up the links and elaborate for ya. ^w^

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[jennamae]

Kk~ Thnkx Much sweetie!

-..sMiLe I lOvE yOu..-